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The young colt sat down on the ground and growled at his misfortune. He didn't like being at the school. He just felt that he didn't really belong there. After a few minutes, he stood up and started walking back towards the forest. This had been and interesting day with an interesting lesson; dragons are jerks.
 
The young colt sat down on the ground and growled at his misfortune. He didn't like being at the school. He just felt that he didn't really belong there. After a few minutes, he stood up and started walking back towards the forest. This had been and interesting day with an interesting lesson; dragons are jerks.
 
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===Midnight Run===
 
 
(Transcribed from [[http://friendshipismagicrpg.proboards.com/index.cgi?board=deadthreads&action=display&thread=6315#ixzz2PyS7vGWO]] by Foxfire)
 
 
It had been a busy day for the Clousdale Weather Factory. The day's reports had just been complied and placed on the appropriate desks. The night shift was busy, making sure Equestria's weather was balanced, while the day shift workers had long since gone home -- all except for one Pegasus, who lay sleeping at her desk.
 
 
*thud* A stack of reports hit the desk, waking up the Pegasus who slept there.
 
 
"hmmm, whaa" the Pegasus said with a growl. She had already had to fill in for two other ponies who called off that day, so she was in a bitter mood.
 
 
The messenger piped out a short reply "so sorry miss, it's just, you see, the Whitetail Wood is two weeks behind it's fog schedule"
 
 
"Can't be right..." replied the half-asleep Pegasus, but the messenger was already gone. With Blurry eyes, Cloud Kicker gazed at the report. 'hmm, uh oh, this was not good' she thought. All this missed fog had thrown off the weather cycle.
 
 
Cloud Kicker was wide awake and marching toward the opening flight deck. Even the night crew looked surprised to see her there, and she received many turned necks as she came to a stop at the edge of the deck which now was fully open to the serene evening below. It was unusual for a weather team to work at night, and even more unusual for an assistant supervisor to be on the flight deck preparing for a weather change, typically she stayed in an office doing paperwork or supervised a crew from above. Tonight was different.
 
 
Cloud Kicker took off her white lab coat and hard hat and strapped on weather goggles.
 
 
"Lets get a full square mile of nimbus coverage to take down, we're going for soup density here!"
 
 
With that a cloud lever was pulled and two ponies cranked the precipitation valves to saturate the forming clouds dense with water.
 
 
Cloud Kicker rocketed out off the flight deck, through the opening and down into the night sky.  ' It really is quite nice, and serene like this - sigh- oh well' Thought the Pegasus. Behind her a dark wall of cloud followed moving steadily like an ominous wave about to swallow up the world below.
 
 
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===The Search for Swift===
 
 
(Transcribed from [[http://friendshipismagicrpg.proboards.com/index.cgi?board=deadthreads&action=display&thread=6297#ixzz2PyILthei]] by lackofabettername and Cometblaze)
 
 
Oreintail finally arrived at the train station, looking around for any sign of her client. In it's usual fashion, the station was rather busy with proper ponies leaving and more casual tourists arriving. She turned her head to the ticket stand. Part of her plan was to ask for the ticket records... Perhaps it wasn't that easy, but still, she figured that they might get their starting location from where he went to from here lately.
 
 
It seemed that the excitement was finally hitting her. She wasn't sheltered, but she had never really traveled that much outside of Canterlot, which was big enough as it was. If anything, this case might take her all over Equestria... Maybe she should have told her parents, but she decided that she'd write. Surely they'd be proud of her going out on her own.
 
 
Comet had been sitting at the trainstation for the last fifteen minutes. Since he didn't have any belongings aside from the photo, which Orientail currently had, he didn't have to bother packing anything, and was able to get from her house to the station in less than five minutes. She should be here any second now. Comet leaned over the edge of the station's roof, and looked for the pink pony that he was supposed to meet. He soon spotted her, and jumped down onto the floor to go talk to her. He trotted up right next to her, though she didn't seem to notice. Are you ready?
 
 
Being so focused on one area of the train station, she was a bit surprised by what seemed like a sudden appearance, her eyebrows jumping up, "Oh, there you are. I am very much ready, but first, I should explain what I have in mind." she adjusted her monocle, "Obviously, it would take far too long, and be very costly, to go and check every location, especially since he could have moved by the time we arrive. So, I suggest a much quicker way of finding our next location."
 
 
She gestured towards the ticket booth, "I'm sure that one way or another they must keep records of who comes and goes, so perhaps if we were to access said records, we could see his latest departure from here."
 
 
So what, do we just ask them if we can see the records? Comet shook his head. These are ponies personal travel records. Even if they're allowed to just give out free information, they'd never tell us where he went without a good reason, and I don't think "I miss him" qualifies. I don't think that they'll just let us waltz in. We're probably going to have to try something else.
 
 
... Ah, yes, of course, she should have thought of how they'd even get into said records in the first place, "A very good point." Oreintail said, "Perhaps we might ask those around the train station about if they've seen a tall, red Pegasus with greyish-whitish hair and orange glasses?" she said, thankfully not going into anymore detail, but this was assuming that there might be somepony as observant as her to notice such details about something.
 
 
"... Ooor, I might try to use some of my connections, more specifically, my family. They work for a newspaper that I'm sure has it's fair amount of readers. Being the daughter of an advertiser and an editor, along with having two siblings who are a reporter and an interviewer respectively, I'm sure that I could claim that I'm just doing some research for them." she said, not wanting to give up on the idea just yet. She never really worked for said newspaper, if anything the most involved she'd been in one was having her ad put up with the help of her father. But she was sure that it was worth a shot.
 
 
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===New to this small village===
 
 
(Transcribed from [[]] by mistypaw and winterfox)
 
 
Slightly clumsy hooves stepped out of the train that traveled everywhere thought Equestria, the new pony had a light pink pink with bright red mane and tail that flowed to the ground like a river. Sweet Apple, the new arrival, had a map hanging from her large teeth. "Where is it.... Where is it..." The mare mumbled to herself, looking intently at the map.
 
 
Wintersong had gathered her things as quickly as possible, eager to get off the cramp train, she trotted quickly to the door, her knapsack in her mouth and a suitcase slung over her shoulders and secured with a strap. She kept her head down careful to avoid eye contact with the other passengers as she scrambled to the door. "Almost there almost out..." She mumble to herself, the words muffled by the bag in her mouth, right as she slammed into a pony blocking the door, and they both tumbled off the train on to the platform, Winnie's suitcase and knapsack flying open.
 
 
"Oh m-my!" WinterSong stuttered nervously, her cheeks flushed red. "I am so so so sorry!" I didn't see you there, and I was carrying so much and I was in such a rush and and.." She rambled quickly and anxiously trying to gather her scattered belongings and trying not making eye contact with Sweet Apple.
 
 
"Its okay! Its okay!" She reassured the frantic pony, then adding "It was my fault anyways." Sweet Apple quickly gathered the scattered things that belonged in the knapsack and placed them neatly inside and finally secured the strap that kept the bag closed. Picking it up with her hoof, she handed it to Wintersong kindly.
 
 
Winnie gratefully took it, surprised that the other pony wasn't mad. "Thank you.. For not being angry with me, I'm just so clumsy.." She blushes looking at the ground shyly. "If every pony around here is as kind as you this must be a much nicer place to live than canterlot.." She murmured, finally making a little eye contact. She stuck out her hoof to shake Sweet Apple's, "My name is Winter song, I'm brand new here.. Obviously.." The white Pegasus said glancing at the train she had just stepped off of.
 
 
Smiling, Apple reached out her hoof, shaking Winnie's hoof and said happily to her "Im Sweet Apple, i was just looking at my map for my new house, and it seems as if i cant find it..." The earth pony said as she looked around at the town square of Ponyville with confusion.
 
 
"Oh!" Winnie exclaimed a bit too excitedly, "Well ive been here visiting a few times before, I c-could help if you wanted?" She gingerly took the map and set it on the ground, smoothing it out so she could read it better. "Now which one is your house?"
 
 
Apple looked at the mapp a little, her eyes wandering over to Sweet Apple Acres. "It's supposed to be near Sweet Apple Acres, and i think its that one..." She pointed a hoof to the edge of the large farm and added "Im just not sure."
 
 
"Alright well lets get going!" She stared at the map for a moment, "It'll be quicker if we cut through town right past the library!" She said, and began trotting toward Town square.
 
 
Nodding quickly,she grabbed the map and started to follow Wintersong at the same pace.
 
 
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===Delivery from Cloudsdale===
 
 
(Transcript from [[http://friendshipismagicrpg.proboards.com/index.cgi?board=deadthreads&action=display&thread=6333#ixzz2PyDlr1c1]] by Cloudberry and Colt0512
 
 
They had chosen a calm and sunny day for their delivery. Of course, being a Pegasus that was as simple as looking at the weather schedule for the next week that was posted all over Cloudsdale, but even so, they could not have chosen a nicer day. The cloud herders had done a fantastic job and all that could be seen was the fluffiest small white clouds, framed by the deep blue sky of early autumn.
 
 
The soft breeze carrying them easily and safely down from Cloudsdale to Ponyville, all that Cloudberry had to worry about now was her ears falling off if her little cousin would not SHUT UP ALREADY!
 
 
Hurricane pouted. "Hey, be nice. It's my first time down to Ponyville!"
 
Cloudberry internally facehoofed, trying to keep calm. "And you promised to behave professionally. That means flying calmly in line, not flitting about and keeping the satchel nice and steady so the cookies don't..."
 
She realised she had been speaking to empty air. Far above her, the filly was chasing a small cloud, whirling around it with dizzying speed.
 
"Aah!" The baker gave her a panicked look as the filly's saddlebag tilted dangerously. "My meringues!"
 
A panicked dash and some pulled tail-hairs later, the little mare was again flying in line with her older cousin, pouting.
 
"Good. Now remember, when we come to Ponyville, you behave professionally. We are there on business after all."
 
"Yes, cousin." Hurricane shot her a grumpy look.
 
"It's an important meeting for me. Getting the Cakes to sell my macarons in their store is the first step in introducing my line of bakery to the Earth-pony audience... so please, just shut up and behave for once? For me?"
 
"Yes, cousin."
 
Cloudberry looked at her cousin doubtfully as they alighted in the middle of the town square.
 
"Good. Now let's walk carefully and..." - she interrupted herself quickly enough to catch the filly by her feathers before she could flit off to "inspect" the next thing she had seen - "oof! I was saying walk behind me! And don't make eye contact with anyone! I've heard the ponies in this town are all kind of weird and strange things happen practically every day!"
 
She looked around suspiciously, as if expecting a Canis Major to be running around the corner any second now. "Let's just go, deliver the cakes and be off again before anything happens. All right?"
 
 
Elias was out for a walk, he hadn't been out of his home for at least a day and felt the need for some fresh air. It seemed a beautiful day, one he was glad to have decided to go out and enjoy. However he didn't know exactly what he was going to do, he didn't have many friends in ponyville yet so had no one to really meet up with. Instead he decided to go and sit in the town square for a while.
 
 
He spotted a pair of Pegasi landing, a filly and a mare. The filly looked rather exited and Elias could spot that she was dying to go and look around. Elias smiled at the sight, but his grin soon faded when he saw the mares expression, she looked somewhat worried, I wonder if something is wrong? he thought to himself. Elias stood up from his spot and approached the Pegasus with a calm and greeting look on his face, "Well hey there! Sorry for being nosey, but I couldn't help but notice you look a tad bit agitated. I hope you don't mind me asking but is there anything I can do to help?"
 
 
The mare looked up, giving the strange colt a puzzled look.
 
"Uh... no, no thank you." She quickly smoothed her feathers, looking a bit embarrassed at being caught upset.
 
"It is quite all right." She smiled at the colt shyly. "Er... would you mind showing us the way to..." - she consulted a note from her bag - "Sugarcube corner?"
 
 
The little filly peeked out from behind her back, giving the colt a wide grin. "Cousin Cloudberry and I are making a delivery there! Do you want to try a camaron?"
 
Cloudberry blinked. "They're called Macarons, Hurricane..."
 
She smiled quickly at the colt, still looking somewhat nervous. "Oh, er... yes. Would you like to try one? I brought enough to give out samples!"
 
 
"I'd love to try one!" Elias exclaimed with a smile. He leaned over and took a macaron carefully in his mouth and leaned back again before starting to eat. Elias had to admit, it tasted good. He hadn't tasted anything like it before, it took him only a few moments to finish eating the tasty treat,They're amazing, did you make them yourself?
 
 
"Oh, and of course I'll take you to sugarcube corner." Elias motioned the two to follow him before starting to walk down one of the roads.
 
 
"Oh, thank you very much - for both!" Cloudberry smiled, following the colt. Suddenly, Ponyville didn't seem so strange, after all. At least that colt seemed nice so far...
 
"I'm Cloudberry, by the way. And yes - I'm a baker! If you ever come by Cloudsdale, you should come by my bakery and I'll return the favour - I mean, I'll show you around, if you want!"
 
"Can I show him around?" Hurricane flitted by excitedly, flying rounds around the pair. "I'll show you all the best places to cloudslide - oh, and the wind park - and the secret entrance I've found to the weather factory!"
 
Cloudberry rolled her eyes and gave the colt an apologetic look. Somehow, she was thinking, the ones coming off as strange were not the Ponyville ponies here...
 
 
"It's a pleasure to meet you Miss Cloudberry, My name is Elias. I'd love to take you up on your offer but don't earth ponies just tend to, you know, fall out of Cloudsdale?" Elias gave a light-hearted smile, before turning back to the route ahead.
 
He started thinking about Cloudsdale, he'd never even seen the place. He had heard stories about it when he used to travel but other than 'a city in the clouds' he didn't know much about the place.
 
 
Elias ignored the thought and looked back at the two ponies,"So what brings you down to Ponyville? I'm sure you didn't just come down here to give out a few samples."
 
 
Cloudberry looked at the, indeed, wingless colt and a dark pink blush appeared on her cheeks.
 
"Oh, I... I forgot about that. I'm sorry! Um... maybe you can take an airship sometime? I think they have those for special events..."
 
She trailed off, looking to the ground. The silence grew longer until Hurricane, tired of waiting, nudged her energetically.
 
"Wha?" Cloudberry looked up. "Um... samples, right! Well... these aren't all for samples, of course - I had been hoping I could convince the owners of Sugarcube Corner to sell these at their shop. It would be simply wonderful if Earth Ponies could sample all those light fluffy bakeries just as easily as Cloudsdale pegasi, I thought."
 
She smiled widely at the colt, suddenly excited.
 
"Don't you think?"
 
 
"That actually sounds like a great idea! I bet lots of Earth ponies would love to taste some foods from Cloudsdale, I doubt many of us have and that could boost sales up quite a lot. I know I'd certainly buy the if they all taste that good." Elias gave a wide grin back at the mare. He carried on walking, the thought of visiting Cloudsdale now stuck in his head. He'd always wanted to go and see Cloudsdale, he'd heard about the weather factory and the wind parks before, the process of how they form the weather seemed an interesting subject. He had managed to ignore the wish but now,Cloudberry had managed to flush out that memory and now Elias couldn't get it out of his head. They turned another corner and Elias lift his hoof and pointed up the road,"There it is, Sugarcube corner."  He exclaimed in a cheerful tone...
 
 
The mare smiled, excitedly looking at the small baker's shop. "It looks... great!"
 
Her wings fluttered excitedly as she approached the shop. "Do you think they are open yet? Um... maybe I could buy you a coffee when I have spoken with them? As thanks for your guidance..." Her cheeks blushed slightly pink. Was that too forward for Ponyville ponies?
 
 
Behind her and quite out of her sight, Hurricane pulled a "bleh" face. Adults!
 
 
Elias smiled at the excited Pegasus,"Sure, I'd love to get a coffee with you." He looked over at the shop and squinted slightly for a better view,"I can't tell if it's open, I'm sure they wouldn't be closed at this time but I can't quite tell." He looked at Cloudberry again, he smiled, there hadn't been anypony wanting to do something like this the whole time he had been in Ponyville. He was happy to see that ponies were still willing to come to Ponyville despite all the weird happenings that had taken place here...
 
  
 
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She looked back to Mist and appoliziged to him for being so hyper. She explained it had always been her dream to be a famous popstar across Equestria and lately she'd been having trouble writing songs. "But your adventures! They might just make me big!" She exclaimed as she jumped high up into the air. She put her hooves together and lay on the ground. "Please, Mr. Mist, will you help me and tell me about your adventures?"
 
She looked back to Mist and appoliziged to him for being so hyper. She explained it had always been her dream to be a famous popstar across Equestria and lately she'd been having trouble writing songs. "But your adventures! They might just make me big!" She exclaimed as she jumped high up into the air. She put her hooves together and lay on the ground. "Please, Mr. Mist, will you help me and tell me about your adventures?"
 
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===Curious Investigations===
 
 
(Transcribe from [[]] by Dream Gaze and Coolcat)
 
 
It was a rather cloudy afternoon in Ponyville with a pleasant breeze washing through the streets. Ponies were going about their business as the day dragged on... One individual in particular had recently finished her work for the day and was looking forward to taking a break for a while. Jamais had just made a delivery of jewels to some suspicious Diamond Dogs outside town but she was never one to judge others... especially if they paid well. She knew she needed to find some more work at some point but for now the Gazelle had enough Bits to last her at least a week so she had plenty of time. For now she had to go and retrieve her stuff from the local Inn and move on to another location... the Nobles in Canterlot were normally in the 'hiring' mood around this time of year...
 
 
Adjusting her cloak she continued her way through the streets, stopping every now and then to look at what the shopping stands had to offer before moving on without a word.
 
 
DiamondHaze had been following the pony quietly the whole day since she gave the gems to the Diamond Dogs. Her notebook had almost become filled with the information she had gathered about EVERY pony in Ponyville. Hmmmmm....., thought DiamondHaze as she observed the pony looking at the stands. "Obviously likes listening to other ponies talk," she Diamond quietly yet neatly wrote in her notepad.
 
 
Acting natural, Diamond tucked her notebook into her saddlebag and went over to a stand selling strawberries and said, "I'll take one pack." She watched Jamais out of the corner of her eye as the pony behind the stall gave a package of strawberries. Dia tossed four bits into the pocket of the seller and trotted casually in the direction Jamais was heading.
 
 
Jamais took a moment to look at some wares through a shop window and her eyes narrowed on a familiar reflection in the glass. That's the 7th time she had seen that mare today, it couldn't be a coincidence could it? No... This mare had been stalking her, she was sure of this. Still it wouldn't be the first time she dealt with a 'viper in the grass.' First she needed to identify who was following her. The Gazelle turned away from the shop window and continued walking down the street... This continued for a few minutes before she abruptly turned into an alleyway and vanished from sight.
 
  
 
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